The thing I noticed instantly is that your lacing on you bodice isnt the correct way to lace corsets and bodices. You never tie a bodice from the top!
the laces start at the middle of the corset and work their way up and down. so your bottem can have the right sized lacing, and your upper nreat area can be laced to its perportion and the laces arnt compeating the hole time about it.
Looking at the bodice. does it have any boneing? it doesnt really look like it to me.it needs some suport. it may have and I just can't see it.
finnaly, id consider some more panels in the design so you can get the curve you want without messing up the pine stripes as i see some poking out on the back.
Over all its a good piece of work. Ihave always loved pinstripes. and what on earth is the trim? its really cool!.